Me

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    This is one of my first poems that I ever came up with and I really spoke my feelings on this one. It kind of talks about how I felt for someone who in return, in my dreams, I knew would not want me anyway. So it's like a fantasy in my head, but in reality it would never be.

    Me
    I like to write, so good, so bright. This is me, this

    is I so quiet and shy. I watch the day, I watch the night

    from dark to light. I think of you, I think of me, happy

    together as can be. I had a dream, I had a fear that no

    one would care. That you weren't there, and I had

    nothing/no one to love. None of the above.

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    warsaw commented on Me

    08-22-2009

    Young lady you are talented and thank you for sharing but I promise that special someone will come along but always when you least expect it meanwhile be the very best you that ypu can be for your future and keep on writting your good sincerely WARSAW
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    Hampton commented on Me

    07-01-2009

    Cleverly conceived and written with poetic flow in a simple and straight forward style that should appeal to all who read it.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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