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    I wrote this during a dark part of my life... going through major trails and just not sure what to do with my life.
    Written:  2/04/09

    ME

    I am not sure if faith is enough anymore
    My life feels like a joke more than ever before
    I feel as though I am spinning out of control
    And no one really cares anymore

    I sit and wonder why all this is happening to me
    This year has started out at the worst place ever
    With everything falling apart all around me
    And feeling like I have no place to go

    My life is a joke with no hope anymore
    Not sure what I can do to get out of all of this
    Heading forward just to get pushed back down
    Not sure what the point is anymore

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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