Meeting a girl’s father

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Meeting a girl’s father

As I sit here in her living room

Meeting her father for the very first time

 

I’m trying to find the right thing to say to her very protective daddy

I wonder what I should do

 

Should I stay here terrified tapping the floor with my black shiny shoe?

Or should I get up and leave

 

But it was too late

As he entered the room it felt like I was in the mist of doom

All I could hear and feel is my heart beating tremendously fast

 

When he began to speak as he approached me

His powerful voice was somewhat like a punch

It knocked me right off my feet

 

So all that I could do after that is get up and run

Just like the release of my body liquid was running down my pants leg

 

And as I pulled my man hood back together

I realized that the feeling of meeting a girl’s father for the first time is not at all fun.

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cousinsoren commented on Meeting a girl’s father

03-13-2010

Hey, I love the clean ,easy style of this narrative poem. The humour is veiled, but a reader can easily identify with the entire story line of this immaculately crafted piece. I had to meet a future mother- in-law. ........LOL "man hood" should be written........"manhood". Cosmetics and rhythm would have improved with punctuation. Overall, this is masterly composed narrative piiece...a pleasure to read with a smile and a chuckle. My rating is 10+

almonord1990

06/18/2010

thank you very much

Pisces00 commented on Meeting a girl’s father

01-06-2010

Oh yeah I can defiently relate to that.... As far as I see it, when you present yourself in a genuine fashion, flaws and imperfections in clear view, they can at least admire you for keeping your image down to the letter. But very nice

almonord1990

01/09/2010

Thank you and remember to pass my SN on to other people so they can read read and i will do the same for u.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

Title Comments
Title Comments
In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7