MEMORIES

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  • Lost Love

    MEMORIES

    Memories like the crystal falling rain
    Come back so clear when I hear your
    name
    You said I would forget you
    In time my love for you would fade
    Yet still it lingers here
    Like an angel in the shade

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    Bongky commented on MEMORIES

    04-25-2009

    Short poems, at times, are meant to evoke specific and clear images and emotions as in this one... great work!

    LenaMP commented on MEMORIES

    03-14-2009

    I liked how you spun words in association like crystal rain and clear and fade with shade describing memories as being the lightness and sadness being the dark. Nice poem.

    MidnightPoet commented on MEMORIES

    03-10-2009

    Felt that way myself, but don't express it as well. Midnight Poet

    BCP commented on MEMORIES

    01-15-2009

    deep emotions here and a great poem. some love just never goes away.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    PhantomPoet’s Poems (7)

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