Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon

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Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon

Jimmy got a whipping today at school,
Mary announced at the table
with delight.
Mama sat down heavily in her chair
and frowned at Jimmy,
who was glaring at Mary over his plate.

Father poured himself a glass of iced tea
and told us a joke he'd heard
at work.
Mama smiled faintly at him,
wiping the baby's mouth with one hand,
passing the corn with the other.
What happened to your arm, Mama?
Oh, I burned myself on the iron.
Without expression, she held up her arm
to show us the long red mark near
her wrist and, in the same movement,
reached for a napkin to wipe up the tea
Mary spilled.
She tossed the napkin in the sink
and said, Mrs. Pacheco came over
this afternoon,
her son's been listed as Missing-In-Action.

Pass the salt, Father smiled at Adam,
who grinned back at him
through a dirt mask.
Mama glanced around the crowded table
and sighed.
Where's Tommy?
Lord, that child's never home anymore!
She scooted her chair back
and reached down to pick up the spoon
the baby dropped on the floor.
Mama,
Tommy went to tell his girl
he was drafted today.

When's the last time you made meatloaf,
Father asked, picking up his fork,
and the baby cried,
the dog barked,
and Mama got up and went outside.


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Writer1 commented on Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon

08-03-2010

I got goosebumps from this. I'm a Mom...and can relate. But I think any family member could say the same. Thank you for sharing this. I loved it. I felt as though I "was there." ~Sandy

NenaT

08/17/2010

Putting the reader there is what I was trying to do. I'm glad I succeeded.

ginga commented on Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon

03-27-2010

Nena, The family unit is a personal yet intricate part of the civilized world. All that the reader is privy to here sheds light about the civil and uncivil ways of life. ty for sharing. ginga

NenaT

03/30/2010

Thank you for reading it and commenting on it.

Helios commented on Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon

03-21-2010

Have you thought of writing this in prose form? This piece a great example of "heightened imagery and emotional effects". There is always a way to write without restricting yourself to verse form and still call it poetry.

NenaT

03/30/2010

I really hadn't thought of it, but I think you may be right.... it is something for me to explore. Thank you.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon 3
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She Loves Him 2
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