Memorys from the Monsters

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    Memorys from the Monsters

     Shh dont tell dont talk dont wail.

    But stop I wont tell just stop!

    Ha ha shut up your nothing to me

    I push and punch and kick and scream

    Silence is within him

    I somehow pushed him away like i some how always do

    Looks are traided

    I say fuck off

    he almost starts to smirk

    So I grab the knife and say it again

    He hesitates knowing last time I cut him

    Just like the drunken cousin

    I dare not say

    For he knows that he would have

    But once again the fight was on

    And once again I pushed him away running out the room

    three guys in one story three sides to each

    It dosnt get easier you just get feed up

    Like the guy from school found out I dont play with that

    Now four guys to my story a long sad tale but still I must learn still i must live.

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    Strider commented on Memorys from the Monsters

    08-03-2009

    I have been reading your poems and I find that a common thread ties all of them together - life painful experiences. I was once told by a great poet (Chinua Achebe), that poetry and philosophy are similar but must be written differently. You have choosen to use your poem to tell your stories which in some way is your philosophy, hence your poems have lacked some poetry in the process. You spill out strong touching words that leaves us (no doubt) in thoughts, but still has me questioning where is the poetry?
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    ahardwalk

    08/03/2009

    well like I said in my homepage I'm doing this as a way to vent. I dont really think im a poet but to me this helps me deal. So I guess this is more philosophy then poetry but like I said it helps. Thanks for your comment that was very insightful!

    carmentis commented on Memorys from the Monsters

    07-19-2009

    to live is a great gift most over look it and seek great vuales out of the life thier been given , but to take another life is the ultimate hand feeding gesture to teh beaste within all of man and women , to trust dies once it has been injured keep true to what you write
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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