Merciless

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    Merciless

     How sweetly he twists his razor tongue
    It glints like silver in the sun.
    Wherever his kisses fall, blood is drawn.
    Gracious.
    Merciless. 

    Fleetly flying from madness,
    My wing-grown flight is confident.
    Behind me the bathing sun is as keen as light --
    Blinding warmth and soft love
    Stunning.
    Seduction.

    I prefer a casket to lay this love to rest.
    Let the sun bedecked in glory
    Sing soundlessly behind me!
    My rhythm is rising now, as a star
    In a horizon I carved with my hands.

    I too can be gracious.
    Merciless.
     

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    Madelynn commented on Merciless

    01-22-2011

    I literally have to remind myself to breathe reading your work! Im entranced!! I prefer a casket to lay this love to rest. Let the sun bedecked in glory Sing soundlessly behind me! My rhythm is rising now, as a star In a horizon I carved with my hands. - holy moly Jammin!!- Nothing else needs said, your work speaks for itself!!- Maddi
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    Jammin

    01/24/2011

    Thank you! This one was very personal. And it took a while to finish it because I needed to express myself just right. :)

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Merciless

    12-04-2010

    I love the words in this one. I feel like your talking about a vampire or a love that sucks the life out of you on one hand and yet gives a different type of life on the other. Great write, very intriguing........E
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    Jammin

    01/24/2011

    E!!! I love whenever you drop by for a visit. Will be checking your poems later...:)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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