Message In a Bottle

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  • Lost Love

    Message In a Bottle

    You make it so hard for a man to love you
    You push me away with your silence
    I want to Love
    But not if your going to treat me like this
    Let me in, show me your Heart
    Show me how much you want my Heart
    Stop going through the motions
     Stop doing the bear minimum
    Let what ever you have for me
    Light on fire and ignite your passion for me
    If at all
    Let me feel your Heart
    Stop doing only enough to have my attention
    For you will not have it any longer
    For as long as you choose
    To remain silent
    Fight for me
    The reward is me
    In my fullest
    Wiith all my Heart 
    With Love
    I miss the woman that included me in her life
    The woman who was passionate with me
    Come back to me
    From where ever it was
    You disapeared
    -Fin- 

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    poett commented on Message In a Bottle

    02-22-2014

    Sorry to hear but like I tell my son sometimes it takes pain to open our eyes and see if we are willing to be mistreated all the time. Don't think it over if it smells bad n looks worst its probably not good for you...

    poett commented on Message In a Bottle

    02-22-2014

    Lovely write. Emotional n so intense you can feel the hurt n pain in every phrase.

    TheLastCowboy

    02/22/2014

    thank you, and at the same time this feeling shes giving me right now hurts like hell.

    pura commented on Message In a Bottle

    02-21-2014

    I get so curious wondering how so much passion just falls apart! Keep writing

    TheLastCowboy commented on Message In a Bottle

    02-20-2014

    (she wasn't worth my time)

    TheLastCowboy commented on Message In a Bottle

    02-20-2014

    Well never mind on this one, I was right about her.

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