Messed Up Shit.

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    • ShanneN
    • A working class hero is something to be.

    Messed Up Shit.

    You see,

     I don’t have the balls to commit suicide,

    Im only leavin you if its homicide.

    And these bitches think they do it better,

    U go and try to get her,

    Shes a nasty ass hoe, leave her be.

    U want the best, u stick wit me.

    smokin that grass, pop a cap in ya ass,

    cuz I said, “puff puff pass”,

    now ya dead, and im alone in ur bed

    ur sittin in the closet, rottin from toe to head.

    Phone wont stop ringin, doorbell keeps dingin,

    They lookin for you, if only they knew.

    Today marks one month ur gone, only you’re here,

    No I mean physicly you’re here.

    What have I done o dear o dear.

    nah but this is crazy, none of its true.

    I don’t smoke, I don’t drink, and neither should you.

    I mean drinkin’s ok as long as your 21.

    Now this shit sounds like fun.

    Made me think of 21 guns by green day.

    Hope to meet them one day.

    That would be awsome, im they numba one fan.

    Ill be all up over the lead singer of the band.

    And the rest of them too.

    What does this have to do

    With the previous words in here.

    Im bored now so, if ur 21, go have yourself a beer =]

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    lastyl commented on Messed Up Shit.

    07-17-2010

    very good, while i was reading i was putting it to a beat!! brings back freestyling memories!! great job, It was almost like you wrote that to a cool instrumental. like it!!

    xMilesSmilesx commented on Messed Up Shit.

    03-26-2010

    hahahahhaa, nigga's tryna put my nigga down, thats some bullsheeet!

    winterkou commented on Messed Up Shit.

    12-16-2009

    Likin' it , you definetly know how to flow you go girl!!!!!!!!!!

    blackfootlady commented on Messed Up Shit.

    12-09-2009

    This should be put to rap music,the material definately suits it.churv

    MarionYost commented on Messed Up Shit.

    12-09-2009

    FUCK CENSORSHIP!!!! This was cute Shannenand, to be blunt 'Censorship BLOWS'..... I agree with fatboy.. It's called YOUR'S because it belongs to YOU! If they can't deal with Freedom of speech let um go to a church and "Pray for your soul." This was creative and cute.. all the best. -Marion-

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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