Michelle

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  • coacher
  • Just posted a poem titled "As I grow older".

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Michelle lost her life to cancer after a year long battle. Her testimony or her Savior Jesus Christ never wavered.

Michelle


 

Spirit undaunted, gracious and true

A hero to us we look up to you

A stony path with sorrow, and with trials

Affliction you’ve met with grit and with smiles

 

Why you? No answer. I am at a loss

We must look to he who carried the cross

He understands your pain and your plight

And through the atonement he’ll make it right

 

Spirit undaunted, remaining faithful and strong

Your beautiful testimony is like a sweet song

Your example of courage surely will last

After your short time here has passed.

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ayyan commented on Michelle

11-08-2009

A good poem to my sense which I love it. Spirit undaunted remaining faithful and strong , isit so!

jademelissa74 commented on Michelle

11-05-2009

Beautifully arranged. A great tribute to this amazing woman. The essence was warm from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing such work. God bless!

coacher

11/05/2009

Thank you. She was amazing to the very end. Some of us have a spirit that resists all trials even death.

Madelynn commented on Michelle

11-05-2009

I had a feeling you could lay it down! LOL-This was a pleasure to read! You are very talented-so glad you sent that request, this was the first I have read of you, so in a sense, this was my appetizerLOL-Now Im gonna go see other goodies Im sure you have penned!-Maddi

Hampton commented on Michelle

11-04-2009

This is a well done poem with nice rhyming throughout.

coacher

11/04/2009

Thank you for your positive comment.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

coacher’s Poems (13)

Title Comments
Title Comments
As I grow older 12
The edge of darkness 16
The Stallion 9
Is my life my own? 16
The Lords toolbox 5
Life is good 1
My Work 3
Prayer 3
Michelle 4
faith 5
repentance 2
pride 2
my mother 6