*Midnight*

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10-25-06  Ohh yeahh...lol

*Midnight*

A kiss, a whisper,
A touch in the night.
A magical moment
When dreams take flight.

Tomorrow, a mystery
Waiting to unfold.
Tonight is our secret,
Best left untold.

The song of the stars
That shine in the sky
Sing us a slow, sultry lullaby.

Your eyes shine like diamonds.
Burn holes through my soul.
This passion, this yearning,
It's out of control.

You hold me so tightly.
Our bodies are one.
Our skin, now bathed
In the warm morning sun.

In the last few moments
After the dawn
We share long, sweet kisses,
And then you are gone...

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Insideme commented on *Midnight*

06-23-2010

Sometimes the positioning of the sun , moon and stars make for these times. I love this , especially "The song of the stars That shine in the sky Sing us a slow, sultry lullaby."

MootPoint commented on *Midnight*

06-09-2010

Full of mystery and imagination. Very good. Thanks. :)

DrewMcNee commented on *Midnight*

06-05-2010

This piece has a gentle sensuality but I note your last line. Consider swapping the first three lines of stanza 5 with stanza 6. See what you think. This is good and the poet decides.

kdarcy commented on *Midnight*

06-05-2010

I have several along the same lines as this. I so could have written this, I loved it ... I have no choice. Stop by if you find moment, be well, k

kesavkavumthara commented on *Midnight*

03-19-2010

Very attractive and sensual by souland body!..a goodwriting..i really experienced it!...thankyou!

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