Mind Trap

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Mind Trap

My mind is trapping me
These emotions are sapping me
These energies are tapping me
Just want my happy me
A direct desire for stillness
The quiet simple place
The more I try to will this
The faster it escapes
Perhaps I need to let go
Of trying to control
My life and circumstances
Have trust in taking chances
Become a leaf upon a stream
Ride the natural flow
Like when you're in a dream
Allow my world to grow
Blossom like a flower
Open up like the sky
There is such a power
In letting yourself run dry
An empty well
An empty shell
Can be a clear space
For me to replace
Stale water with fresh raindrops
Stagnant judgments with fluid thoughts
Freedom from the sludge in me
That feels like constant drudgery
That clogs up my machinery
And stifles the Being I Be
Sometimes I want to crack open my head
Shake out all the dust and cobwebs
Old thoughts, old patterns
Ripe for disposal
Go from narrow to wide
Open up a new portal
Fill in the divide
Between God-Force and mortal
Integration of all
Be the sum of my total

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786mona commented on Mind Trap

07-08-2009

OH MY GOD! this poem is so insipring that ummm....ummm....(stumbling , looking for words)....i cant think of words to explain that how much i like this poem! It is a great poem adn i love how you put it together! You've got a talent girl!

trocka7

07/08/2009

thanks, mona! I appreciate your feedback so much, glad that this had meaning for you...

WordSlinger commented on Mind Trap

07-05-2009

I love your fast pace prying into your soul. I like how you to sling words, slinging out the junk that just piles up, and taking in the positive things, you are amazing, I really love this.

angel2380 commented on Mind Trap

06-16-2009

wow that was truly amazing as i know u compliment my poetry as good i believe yours is much better, as i use my emotions to write, i believe that how you write whether you use your emotions or not is much better and i wish my writing was just as amzing as yours is. Angel

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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