mind's eye

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    mind's eye

    wandering in my minds eye , with the love of life and isle of hearts delight. light of wonder light of life ,with which we stand alone and into the garden of our lifes with its beauty alone our guide. guiding light alone we find, our hearts desire and the love of our mind. a war within ani't hard to find its the peace that stands that makes up the cast of our lives. desire guides us but peace unites us, love will find us ,as love always finds a way.

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    rougepriest commented on mind's eye

    08-24-2009

    good imagery here have you thought about using stanzas to make the flow easier (not better per se`) just a little easier to read, i liked it you have a certain theme to your poems kinda mystical like, nice job

    Deckard commented on mind's eye

    07-02-2009

    very nice kind of 'stream of consciousness' yet very articulate and precise in meaning. good work!

    PRober commented on mind's eye

    07-01-2009

    well stated, and it will, if it hasn't already... someday!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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