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    mine

    quiet nocturnal blue
    hushed truth of
    profound and perfect
    eyes glisten softly, steadily
    and just this once
    a smile of
    rosy red hues
    mix dark
    with light and laughter
    bricks and mortar break
    with a strength
    beyond all physical measure as the
    noise of night silence
    bright and unbroken
    steals the floor with insistence and
    craves an absence of resistance
    your mouth
    moves freely
    without reservation
    troubles ease and thoughts release
    a touch of trust
    and faithful reactions
    differences resign their
    predestined assignments
    a stream of black on blue and
    reflect
    stars of midnight
    unfocused white
    images of shadows play softly
    in dark corners
    fighting to be released
    and forgotten
    forgiveness brings redemption to faults
    truth emanates
    from rocky borders
    an inclination
    of regression impedes
    and disappears
    and as fallen stars collapse
    upon eyes wide open
    shaping unfeigned promises
    i whisper
    i love
    you

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    kdarcy commented on mine

    05-07-2009

    Appeals to the eye and the mind, great read

    Grito commented on mine

    04-17-2009

    Such a whisper! 10

    soulwriter commented on mine

    04-17-2009

    I enjoyed the flow of words, how they never stopped moving down the page... and with each syllable the revelation transposed....... Write on Write on!

    dahlusion commented on mine

    04-11-2009

    This is like a day full blown with love, passion, soul, and tears that lovers swallow.

    stephenmichael commented on mine

    04-09-2009

    Again very beautiful.Steady and true...a touch of trust and faithful reactions...wow

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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