Mirror

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  • xdavidabramx
  • tear the petals off of you, make you tell the truth // Hole

Mirror

I love you

(I'll never let you forget) me

Keeping it down

In reality, are you present?

I see you, always

Peripherally, never solid

Blurry, like love, like lust, like pain

 

I need you

(I'll never let you forgive) me

You're like an empty feeling

Caressing the pit of my stomach

My soul, do we have a regret?

Not yet

Amazing, like you, like hurt, but not like me

 

I want you

(I'll never let you forget) yourself

Remember everyday

Words that flow

Out of me, I'm never complete

I'm like half of a soul

Where's your better half?

I'll never let you forget

 

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Platti commented on Mirror

04-28-2010

Hmm, I rather like this one. 'I see you, always Peripherally, never solid Blurry, like love, like lust, like pain' brilliant my friend! :3 Keep at it!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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