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     Only you when I look in the mirror
    Your mistakes your trouble all I can see
    The only me I see is a picture
    Will they ever look be on and se me
    Look at what you left for me to clean
    Even so I never came to dislike
    How did this become you are your own friend
    I win you and I am not a like
    But some how you shadow follows me back
    How did that title ever get my name?
    Can I improve what in god’s name I lack?
    The one who gave me life and when away
    You who sits and wait to be free one day.

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    trets commented on mirror

    06-30-2009

    kinda confusing, but i got it after i thought baout it and re read it a couple of times. you should hit the enter button after every break where your saying one line and then continue on it would make it easier to read. if i even made sense lol
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    baddollyr2

    06/30/2009

    you know what i didn't even edit this one

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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