mirror

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mirror

where none became one
found a playmate in a mirror
once betrayed
became afraid
never to trust myself again.

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SThomas commented on mirror

10-23-2009

Nice...very nice...I had to read it a few times, and found myself reading it again just to get that build up, looking forward to the ending, again and again...

abbadejuju

12/12/2009

thank you!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

abbadejuju’s Poems (34)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Pain 0
mirror 1
This Is(As I) 0
10 minute Infinite 1
An untitled emotion 2
Rubber Room 1
METROPOLIS 4
The Bush Wool 4
The Emperor to His Empress 2
The Morning Spell 1
BREATHE 2
Flotation Device(Blowfi
sh syndrome)
0
Untitled tongue tag: Your It! 0
Poem of a statement of an observation 1
Uh...Yeah 0
SPAM(a little more than a haiku) 0
Much More(to my sister) 2
GOT FAITH? 2
Ode to Debtera (My Djembe) 0
OLD SOUL 1
RETURN of the Forked Tongue 3
All i Have 3
untitled2 1
untitled1 2
AVERAGE 1
Life and the Limited Expression 2
The Journey to I AM 2
Original Po 2
The String Thing 1
SOUP 0
The Times 2
Opposing Force Pt.2 to Forked Tongue 1
Forked Tongue Pt.1 1
A Trace 2