MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

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    MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

    I'm really tryin to find a way to question my reality. It seems as if anything & everything has become a duality, without any foremention of practicality, let alone an after thought of human casualities. Whatever pleases your senualities is fine because if it isn't already a reality, eventually, I suppose it too will become a commonality. All because of your choices, your decisions, your reality, your will in freedom to do what it is you want to do when you want to do it. Yeah we're all caught up in freedom! FREEDOM - compound word, free and dumb. Always Free to choose, Dumb because we keep making the wrong choices. Not sound choices, but choices that keep us bound. This is our reality, y'all, young men walking around wit your pants almost to the ground, attitudes wound so tight people just wanna fight. No regard, no regret, no respect, filty language spoken at the drop of a hat, I, I, I don't feel like it, I can do it, I wanna do it, I'm gonna do it cause I can do it. Ooh and you got tattoos! Is that really you? I remember when that used to be a taboo! Wanna be cool ditching and dropping out of school, now tell me who's really playing the fool? Sexual intercourse used to be a delicacy between a man and his wife. Now it is the main course of strife and the ultimate choice of your life. Lust, not love, he's the one your thinking of while whe's the one you're making love. Got laid, now you're made. Got played, oh but you got paid. Your choices, your decisions, your will, your realities, Free - Dumb choices. Schemes, scenes, scripts and plays acted out in youthful ways. Smile you're on candid camera, photogenic you're all up in it. Advertising, disguising, mesmerizing, demoralizing and disorganizing. So many rhymes with no reasons. How many seasons are you gonna be prey to this mankind treason? What do I see? How can this be? I see you, I see me in the reflection of this mirror, mirror. It can't get any clearer. For the days of repentance are drawing nearer bringing God dearer. Cain, Canaan, Ishmael, Reuben, Esau and Manasseh the rejected brothers of Genesis had the heirs of the offsprings to the King. I could just scream cause I know walking right melts down suspicion and hostility and will disease you into a plague quarrantine whereby only God will reign supreme. Intimacy & celibacy breeds a calming peace, Jesus Christ our Lord and savior brings eternal peace. Come, come to the river, look, look into the mirror, the reflection is in the river... its you, its mirrored. God's choice, listen don't you hear his voice? Don't you hear his voice?

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    StandingBear commented on MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

    06-27-2009

    A deep, deep river of a cerebral write. Let it out sister, great thinking equals great writing. Love it!

    Niecy

    06/29/2009

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR TAKING TIME TO READ & SHARE YOUR COMMENTING THOUGHTS!

    Realtalk commented on MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

    05-26-2009

    *snap*snap sista Nicey!!!! It is important to anaylze our reality because we can find that it is actaully fantasy that we are trying to live. Your wordsd forced me to turn the mirror on myself and also the world around me. I feelyou when yo u talk about "Advertising, disguising, mesmerizing, demoralizing and disorganizing. So many rhymes with no reasons. How many seasons are you gonna be prey to this mankind treason? " They only feed us what they want us to absorb. Hense the importance of self

    Niecy

    06/01/2009

    Thank you sistah for sincerity of heart you express with me... our walk must line up with our talk and it is REALTALK Peace unto you! Niecy

    bandit1192 commented on MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

    03-13-2009

    This was very well written, niecy. I think you covered just about every Free dumb there is. Maybe someday they'll listen and actually hear. TS

    NayInLove commented on MIRRORED REFLECTIONS

    02-17-2009

    Lovely poem! :)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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