Miserable

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    Miserable
    oh i'm sooo cold... my body filled with heat,
     
    i lay here and i shiver hoping sleep i will meet,
     
    but i ache all over, i toss and turn in pain
     
    oh how i try to rest, but i try and try in vain.
     
    so i'm in a t-shirt, a pair of black socks on my feet,
     
    i try to move around but i'm just dead beat.
     
    coughing uncontrollably, my chest hurts too,
     
    feeling sooo miserable i don't know what to do,
     
    frequent visits to the washroom, my stomach turns,
     
    my heads' about to explode, my eye burns.
     
    damn this virus!!!! its driving me up a wall!!!
     
    i need something to drink... MOMMYYYY!!!! i call...

     

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    smoothdame commented on Miserable

    12-01-2010

    I like this poem also it is nice how you are able to write about being sick and needing your mommy. good job.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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