Misguided Truths

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just throwing some different type phrases together and working on some different mental images.  This kind of came together in a way where some things made sense and some things didn't.  Was fun to write and at the end I kind of felt like it was worth sharing.  This is for the those that sometimes find themselves writing not really to write something meaningful but to have fun with it.  Hope you enjoy it.

Misguided Truths

Shoes tied too tight, cats in dog fights, swearing they wont, but they just might bite, but can't see through the night.  Strapless Bras, weirded out pause, rape w/ no cause, fake santa claus, clothes stolen from malls. 

Our own President Bush, war being pushed, bugs being squished, blood being spread, mother's mislead, soldiers misfead, dirt and leaves into beds, America still controlled by Feds.  Being Stalked, chickens that fought, dead meat in a week, not given chances to speak, girlfriends mothers to meet, he is hiding defeat, but cant quit his job, controlled by the mob, girls that bob, but only seem to spit, too late to quit, trying to find shit that fits, something legit, but on needles he only sits, rattlesnakes that get bit.

Runny nose, drug store closed, another baby detected, another slut not respected, her life is far from directed.  Still wishing, Hulk Hogan in sub-mission, Hulkamania has died, rookies tried, OJ lied, but soldiers never lied, killing is killing, stealing is stealing, being is being, and dealing is dealing.  Using is using, most are confusing, fuming to get answers,what's the cure for cancer, who still believes in Prancer, how can you call her a dancer, money maker, booty shaker, creeps eyeing to rape her, take everything shes got, baby made to go through alot, but on paper it looks like another dot, whether you like it or not. 

CD's that skip, females that flip, over nothing, she's hiding, she's denying, trying to put you in guilt, her soul split, cant contain what is built, holes in quilts, looking up to no one on stilts.  We walk, she talks, both fought, but its only over in the end, a love now dead, she lost her head, but she wasn't the one alone in the bed, so he's the one mislead.

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Worthless commented on Misguided Truths

05-24-2010

i picture you writing this out on the feild or in action waiting for action. It's like i can feel the expression your trying to get thru here just trying to make that dot bigger and stronger for next year while the world is trying to make it smaller until you dissapear... Keep writing, you know what your saying....

dumplin commented on Misguided Truths

04-27-2010

Wow, this reminds me of one of mine. We are lied to wherever we turn. There's no getting away from it. We just need to discern it from the truth to survive.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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