Missing You My Love

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My husband works nights and I miss him so when I home all alone...

Missing You My Love

I miss you when you are at work,
I miss you when when we don't cuddle on the couch,
I miss you when you don't hold me close in bed,
I miss you when we don't hold hands,
I miss you when we are not talking.

But all in all,
I miss you most when you are not here,
This is why I am laying in bed,
This why I am Missing you,
 my love...

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stellar commented on Missing You My Love

10-17-2010

lovely, lovely, write sunshine...how fresh that love is....but my mom is used to it...she seldom have the company with my pap because he has to go abroad for us...but she's got use to it...^_^ v

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Missing You My Love

10-06-2010

This is a very sweet poem, very cute and loving:) Thank you

sunshine33710

10/10/2010

Thank you for the comment BrokenHeart!

Artie commented on Missing You My Love

10-06-2010

Very nice piece. I think he may quit after he reads this lol - 10 from me

sunshine33710

10/06/2010

Thank you Artie for the comment. Lol he already read it.

knight4696 commented on Missing You My Love

10-04-2010

Sunshine - A very beautiful sentimental write. Nice work! :) Ken

sunshine33710

10/06/2010

Thank you Ken for the comment!

nam1292 commented on Missing You My Love

09-21-2010

very romantic and to the point. great write. it makes me miss that special som1

sunshine33710

09/26/2010

Thank you for the comment nam. I miss my hubby when he works 2 nights. He is a nurse.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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