Missing You

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    Wrote this for a friend that has a long distance relationship ...

    Missing You

     All I can think....Is how I miss you.
    Thinking of some of the things we do.
    A walk in the park or an hour on the phone.
    I wish when I opened the door this was "OUR HOME"
    Remember that day when you made me smile?
    Haven't smiled like that in a while.
    Did you think of me today?
    Hope missin' you is not in the way.
    I have patience and will wait.
    Patiently unitl our next date.

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    Stryx commented on Missing You

    10-04-2009

    Nice and sweet Lady. An easy read. I like it. Thank you.
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    spbsdude commented on Missing You

    09-17-2009

    How painful it can be to wait for someone you truly miss. A nice poem, not your best but nice.
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    LAdyAce

    09/22/2009

    Thanks again.. I know it was sort of spur of the moment written in like a minute. Not alot of thought put in that one.. But thank you for the comment

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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