missing you

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i have been finding myself lately missing my dad more and more, and i have no idea what has caused me to become so sappy about it again, but i have all the same and i felt the need to write this...

missing you

i find myself missing you more,
day by day,
what has re-surfaced these feelings,
I can not say,
to reach the day,
where i can see you,
face to face,
where I can once again,
hug you tight,
just as i used to,
and shed my tears.
as i hear you say
"I love you, my son,
but now i promise you,
i am now here to stay".

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Shelbylolann commented on missing you

09-03-2011

I love this, babe... It aches me to see you miss your dad and not able to see him... I'm here for you 100%!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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