Missing Younger Years

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    Just something I wrote while doing homework.... Yes, I get that distracted lol

    Missing Younger Years

    Oh how I miss the younger days
    when we were free to run.
    No worried about anything,
    except for having fun.

    We didn't need to think about,
    what other people said.
    no gossip, rumors, or little lies,
    only innocense in our heads.

    I miss when life was simple,
    no homework to be done,
    no lectures, speeches, or tests,
    only pretend princesses and dragons.

    Oh how I miss the younger days,
    where I was actually free.
    to run around and just have fun,
    that was the real me.

    The world turns good children,
    into something that they're not,
    angry, depressed, and lonely,
    like me, we all wish to be tots.

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    DeepEclipse commented on Missing Younger Years

    05-25-2010

    Hahha hell yeah. Children probably hold the secret to true happiness. Put a kid in a room full of adults and watch him play, and the energy sparks the room.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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