Monday at Aldi

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    Monday at Aldi

    I saw her the other day
    Smiling with her new man
    Walking hand in hand.
    I try to pretend
    It was the groceries
    Causing her not to notice me.

    Love, no more.
    If it was only that easy,
    Like a switch i could turn
    Then no longer feel,
    Escape the down side.
    Aldi has shown me
    I still love her.

    Midnight conversations,
    Lasting till dawn.
    Holding hands on her futon,
    Ignoring everything else going on.
    I was her mountain of a man
    and she moved me to tears.

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    Hiporlacking commented on Monday at Aldi

    12-06-2009

    This is being added to my favorites bro. I dig your style. Cleveland Rocks!

    dahlusion commented on Monday at Aldi

    12-06-2009

    "I was her mountain of a man and she moved me to tears." — beautiful, simple beautiful! Your honesty and humbleness is a blessing to this site.

    DennisScott commented on Monday at Aldi

    05-28-2009

    This seems forced. The last section should be deleted imo. I understand where you are trying to go but the extra stuff takes away from the message.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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