Moon

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Just a diddy to make u laugh.

Moon

Today I gazed upon the moon
to see if he began to swoon.
nothing there what did I see
I think he looked back at me.

I leaned way back for a better look
tripped and fell into a brook.
flowed along with the flow
as the wind began to blow.

Saw a fish swimming by
caught his tail and made him cry.
felt so bad I nearly drown
as my heart began to pound.

Hit my head on a rock
yes it was quite a shock.
grabbed a tree to set me free
and my spirit was filled with glee.

As I looked upon the moon
it was setting way too soon.
I smile and said it cannot be
the moon was smiling back at me.

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HalfAwake commented on Moon

10-28-2011

Wonderfully random...I suspect drugs were involved...jk

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Morris’s Poems (64)

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UNILLUMINATED 0
DARKNESS 0
Beggars Lament 0
CLARITY 0
DARKNESS 0
HEART SONG 0
Told U! 0
The Forgotten 0
Innocence 0
Welcome 1
Nevermore 1
Majestic 0
Strength 0
The Good Heart 0
Lights 0
"Emi" 0
Time 0
Nearly Lost 0
The Promise 0
Lone 0
Grace 0
Solitude 0
Free 0
Moon 1
Tragedy 0
Dreamer 1
Foreboding 1
Escape 2
My Girl 1
Awaken Sweet One (G) 1
VOID 0
Behold 0
Future Past? 0
Random 0
Vision 0
SAY WHAT? 0
TRUTH. 0
IMAGINE 0
SHADOWS 0
CRYIN FOR YOU 0
"I" 1
BEFORE 0
MAESTRO 2
MY DOG 1
ETERNAL LIGHT 0
LIFETIME 0
Rhythm of Time 2
SPORT OF LIFE 2
Sign Of The Times 7
FADE 8
SHELL 2
Requiem For Life 2
MIDNIGHT 1
Light in Heavan 4
Nightmare 1
Why 12
INSANE 3
End Lust 0
FINAL ILLUSION 1
Tactician 0
Lonely 0
Atheist 3
Toe Jam 8
CHOOSE 3