moonlight love

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    • dirtysouth
    • is enjoying life and gets his insperation from his kids and his loving wife

    moonlight love
    your eyes sparkel in the sky at night,our love under the
    moonlight shine so bright that
    i dream of u everynight the love
    we share so tender so sweet i cant
    wait till the day we meet our tears take me under the night sky
    lips and face so gentel so soft makes me want to go off the pain
    suffering that i share makes me cry
    so dont despair my love for u is
    everlasting that my soulmate will
    always and forever be under the moonlight is my love my sweet
    God i so glade that we meet
    that without u my life is
    incomplete
    dedicated to my soulmate my wife
    leena christine collins

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    queenamma1 commented on moonlight love

    11-11-2008

    this is a beautiful poem. The only thing I have to say is just check your grammar and punctuation. Without punctuation, your reader will be led in different directions.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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