More Than Half-Fair

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    More Than Half-Fair

    What you need to hear:
    (Don’t say a word)

    Everyone is me
    Not the philosophical collective consciousness

    A critic

    Projects self on art

    so be careful what you reject

    And be careful what you respect
    Everyone is a critic

    As if their opinions are something significant from within them
    To be given as gifts/ Presented as/ Art is often the reaching out for acceptance
    So show me

    the ways not go
    The things not to know
    Not to hold sacred
    Not to grow
    Not to feed
    Not to sow
    Not to breath
    Not to read
    Not to write

    I only have one life to lead as this time passes me by

    So please

    Open my eyes
    Show me the light
    Don’t hold back
    Go past the line
    to more than half-right

    Please

    Don’t hold back
    Don’t hide
    You’ll only make time to hone your knives
    Alone but safer
    Cause your anxiously waiting for the enemy,
    prepared To open wide his insides
    Got the right

    So show me

    What your eyes see

    And I’ll try to judge you justly

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    origionalmerlin commented on More Than Half-Fair

    04-21-2009

    well said.. nice to see one of your postings before somone without honor sneeks in and low rates it(we all know who is doing that) this freestyle shows a blending of concepts and is well formed with mindful word choice,and thought to inner structure, well composedif this site asked for reviews i would still rate it as high and give mire detailed analisis, but as comments go this is adiquite.. from reading the expance of your pos

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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