more to go on

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more to go on

I think it is awesome
to find others
who are rotating on a same parallel
it is in these sights
that we are not alone
to walk through a crowd
as a whole
but to spot an ancient tower
from a sky scraper
it makes it all the more beautiful
for the eyes to see
everything in these frames
to exert one's self
in a gifted pattern or design
based on an insightful soul
I applaud these abilities
and I recommend to those
who know not of these ways
to latch on to someone who is
and never let go

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WordSlinger commented on more to go on

02-11-2009

to latch on==and never let go it makes it all the more beautiful== on a same parallel

WordSlinger commented on more to go on

02-05-2009

to exert one's self in a gifted pattern or design based on an insightful soul My Fav

Vincent commented on more to go on

02-03-2009

Imagination wrapped in a blanket of inspiration. Great smiles Vincent

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Hathor4Wine’s Poems (91)

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sudden shivers 0
use of words 0
per se 0
pioneer 0
the quest 0
wide awake 0
welcome to cheap dates 0
crawling for candy 1
all made up 0
necessary diversities 0
burial ground 1
I apologize 2
beyond this 1
my rhyme or reason 1
a replica 3
I stand beside 2
imperial revolution 1
what I do know is... 3
a split tongue 1
a slight of step 1
a once a year occasion 2
a death 1
that amazing light 2
the eye in question 1
my crowded wall 3
no facsimile 2
a vision 2
before I am consumed 2
Compunction 1
essential 1
gewgaw 0
to be a better vine 1
passed by 1
criminal 3
soul burn 5
Thrilled 2
eyes to see 1
poker night 2
a hidden silence 1
you unfinished 4
deep-diving 1
600 mile void 0
untitled love 1
said and done 1
is it warm enough? 1
a song bird fate 2
sad bird 1
and so 3
to my friend 1
untitled 1
Hello to Myself 1
in plain view 1
half note 2
your neighbor 1
to those who forget... 2
that day will come 3
all eyes on you 3
Bella Claire 0
a mirror's poor reflection 1
dirt 2
within reach for now 0
red dawn surfacing 1
how close... 1
pictures do say more 2
forget not 0
I've missed it 3
all is forgiveness 4
it bounced back 4
figure eights 2
My Dancing Queen 3
more to go on 3
off its axis 2
glazed 5
flip side 3
easy now... 3
untimely 3
ignorance 3
exposure 6
one more time 0
inside out 1
queen of denial 3
another 180 degrees 2
and we must 1
It's Always You Too 2
The Cult of "Education" 5
only to return 2
hollywood entrapment 6
not so unseen now 4
Look! No Guard Rails! 4
you just made my day 2
Plenty Of It 3