Mother Dear

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    Mother Dear

    Mother Dear

    What do you fear?

    Broken ties from lies

    Supernatural spies

     

    Mother Dear

    Is your act sincere?

    Or hidden closed by curtain of fear?

     

    Mother Dear

    You could fill the ocean with all my tears

    Wept for nothing,

    Wept because of rage, sadness, loneliness, depression

     

    Mother Dear

    Your judgments know no bound

    And it is unclear

    When you yourself are wrong

     

    Mother Dear

    It is clear

    You’re dying out there

    Crying out there

    Lying out there

    Denying out there

    Trying to hide out there

    Conspiring out there

    In the world out there

     

    Mother Dear

    Your hypocrital tears aren’t getting anywhere

     

    You are alone

    And that’s what your fear

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    bloomingsun commented on Mother Dear

    08-27-2010

    Yup, here's another one, a good write, that purges negative feelings into cathartic experience. Keep writing!
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    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    Yeah I wrote i think all 3 poems in the same day I think. Thanks for your support Hugs Britt

    ginga commented on Mother Dear

    08-26-2010

    Brit, Such sage advice from daughter to Mother. I hope your Mom can rise above her problems someday as your poems drip of the sadness of what she has become. ginga
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    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    Me too ginga me too. It is my greatest prayer. Thanks again for your time and support!!! :)

    ansari commented on Mother Dear

    08-18-2010

    a real out pouring from the depth of your heart. yes it's very emotional. don't be hard on her, however bad times you may have gone through, try to forgive. From what I've learnt 'paradise lies at the feet of thy mother' try to think of the happy days you've had with her. Patience and prayer are two great cures to heal the sorrow in our heart. Never mind if you hate me for what I've said, but try to think over things calmly. May Allah Bless you.
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    BrittKun

    08/19/2010

    yeah it was a poem that just put all my furstration in but i am over it know a did forgive her and nothing can change her but a blessing from havean. So thanks for you comment i am no mad lol : )

    Teardrops commented on Mother Dear

    08-17-2010

    If i may say so maybe your mom is afraid of losing you . Great poem let your mom read it maybe it will help Marie
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    BrittKun

    08/18/2010

    I don't know about that she will probably get afended

    Teardrops

    08/18/2010

    Honey you dont know till you try .My daughter and i got very close becacuse of poetry . I know she loves you try it Marie

    BrittKun

    08/20/2010

    Yeah but she not all there upstairs

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Mother Dear

    08-17-2010

    wow, that was a very strong emotion filled write dear......and it flowed so well with the rhymes.......great write.......thanks....love asha
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    BrittKun

    08/17/2010

    thanks

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