MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

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MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

i may not be the most beautiful,
may not be the most adorable,
the look on my face may not be bearable,
but i'm proud to me.

i dont flap my wings around with the others,
i soar up high and the rest they fly under,
you are too proud was the statement by my sisters and brothers,
all because i go up the mountain to change my feathers.

i am the exact opposite of the pigion,
very different from the robin,i dont go singing,
humans like the doves cos they look very friendly,
they dont like me cos to them,i look very deadly.

speaking of pride,im not like the peacock,
thank GOD im not a fish,so i dont get hook up,
i do things my way so i dont always need some back up, so,when wise birds are talking,mrs ostrich please back off.

i dont talk at all cos im not like the parrots,
to be a strong bird,i dont have to eat carrots,
whenever i sharpen my bick,i know how much it hurts,
and to feed my chicks,i dont have to cook till its hot.

by now you must be wondering who i really am,
you're right im a birdy,obviously not a human,
im not a croc,and im not even a mammal,
i am THE MOTHER EAGLE,the fast and fearless mama.

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Doninha commented on MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

10-04-2009

Wonderful and surprising poem for all bird lovers and young learners!

mrobb6488 commented on MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

04-16-2009

Shows an astonishingly understanding of a mother of any creature be it human or animal-completely deadly. Great job! M-Robb

lucky62 commented on MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

04-16-2009

fly on my fine young African soar among the clouds

PunoAngulus commented on MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

02-25-2009

Good usage of imagery with the symbolism of birds which reminded me of angels. Amazing and brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

bforibus commented on MOTHER EAGLE(THE SPECIAL ONE)

02-13-2009

i loved the picture. and the emotion of this poem. it posted pictures the had a lot of beauty and nature in it. good write

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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MOTHER EAGLE (THE SPECIAL ONE) 1
I BLESS THE DAY 3
YOU ARE DISTINCT. 3
THE BEAUTY OF PATIENCE. 2
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WHAT FRIENDS ARE FOR. 5
THE REASON. 6
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THE BEST THING. 2
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