mother

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mother

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filing out of the police truck
knee deep in the mother fuck
hands tremble
that surely resemble
those last breaths of life
crowds all loud they come around
to view the litter upon the ground
the city never sleeps
but i am sure it weeps
like a heart-broken mother
red lights and meat truck
knee deep in the construct
of busted promises
and broken dreams

a mother never sleeps






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Olan01 commented on mother

10-27-2010

So many sad depictions in this world of mother's grieving. This is a heartfelt poem and quite good. Olan

SEVEN commented on mother

09-27-2010

This piece is so true in the hood..every mother's nightmare... totally nice write.....kudos

Crush

09/28/2010

i wrote "mother" after i saw a greiving mother on the evening news as she learned of her son's murder. it's not so much the murder that is tragic ( although it is quite tragic ) but what crime and murder leaves behind.

bradford commented on mother

08-03-2010

such a strong poem that had so mcuc to say. its nice to read

Crush

08/03/2010

thank you, i realy appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read me.

ApaqRasgirl commented on mother

07-04-2010

wonderful poem, strong emotions shown all through this that flowed well to the end. thanks for sharing with us love Asha

Crush

07/05/2010

thank you so very much.

AmberRaeCable commented on mother

06-28-2010

wow! it gave me goosebumps! very very good! I'm giving you a 10!!!

Crush

07/05/2010

short poems tend to punch which is what i was going for here. thank you for your time, i do appreciate you.

AmberRaeCable

07/08/2010

you're welcome, and thank you :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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