Mothers and Fools

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

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I wrote this for my kids so that they may know that even mothers have to do foolish things sometimes to save their children.

Mothers and Fools

                            I would walk
                         Threw the deepest
                           Darkest cavern
                             And threw the
                             Hottest corners
                                    Of hell,
                                If I knew
                            It would save you.

                              I am a mother
                            As well as a fool,
                            And I sometimes
                              Trudge where
                            Even angels fear
                                  To walk. 

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poetryprincess commented on Mothers and Fools

09-29-2012

Foolishness is for the fools who couldn't care less.... you want to protect those who will carry this world on from harm so that is not foolish but courageous!

Crush commented on Mothers and Fools

09-27-2012

i like the poem but i don't feel that anytthing is too foolish if it saves our children. any children :) nice write, though.

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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