Mountainmountainmountai
n

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Other

    Poem Commentary

    Written on June 21, 2010

    Mountainmountainmountain

     I said she caught me sniffing glue
    She didn't know just what to do
    She scratched her head
    And then she said that
    Disco's dead
    And I might be soon

    I told her I was tryin'...
    ....Following disco's footsteps the best way I can, with platform boots on

    Gonna do the best I can
    To break my hand-
    That fucker's got me nowhere 

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Blueroad commented on Mountainmountainmountain

    07-29-2010

    I'm not familiar enough with some happenings in your poem, just can say that I loved it and enjoyed reading it. I should say that you have a good talent in poetry. I believe you will make great progress if you go ahead.
    Reply to Comment

    Plourde

    08/03/2010

    Thanks for your feedback and encouragement!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    Plourde’s Poems (6)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Gap Skin 2 09/09/2010
    V 0 07/29/2010
    Number 66 0 07/29/2010
    Number 63 0 07/29/2010
    Mountainmount
    ainmountain    		 1 07/29/2010
    Lesbian Haircut* 0 07/28/2010

    Plourde’s Friends (3)

    Top of Page