Mountaintop

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    Mountaintop

    I stand here on this mountaintop
    With no one around
    No noise to distract my mind
    Not a storm in sight
    No rain that will wash me away
    I stand in silence
    In peace
    my soul breaks down the demons
    letting silence to consume my heart
    I stand on this mountaintop
    Watching the distant valleys
    How they are not awaken by the noise of this world
    How nature allows them to be at peace
    I watch the small towns below
    I watch the noise of their lives
    Control their minds and emotions
    I stand here on the top of this mountain
    Free of all the noise that tears us apart
    Free of all the words that brings us down
    Free from the life I live
    I’m at peace
    I am in silence
    No one here except the Lord
    I watch the mountains around me
    How beautiful they are
    How they remind me of the one I love
    Her soul is so pure and enchanting
    Her love brings peace to this world
    They remind me
    That the world is a mystery
    They remind me that our lives are never ending
    I turn my head
    I watch a hawk fly by me
    It does not look at me
    Like it had no use for me.
    The hawk is like society.
    Showing how we tend to neglect
    The ones we need the most
    I stand here listening to the silence
    Allowing it to free my soul
    This mountain is a world like no other
    I stand here thanking him for this peace
    Today I am free of our noise
    For tomorrow, our sound will surround me.

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    bravewave0 commented on Mountaintop

    07-11-2009

    Nice One. .

    ivecute77 commented on Mountaintop

    12-01-2008

    well written

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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