Mourn the Weeping Sky

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    Mourn the Weeping Sky



    Percieved decades have seemed to pass since I
    last saw their face. Hindsight of regrets and past
    mistakes, should've have cared but I didn't. Heart
    longing to see them again, lost connection is so far away.

    Unwanted sheltering, they clipped my wings before I
    learned to fly, I mourn the weeping sky. All the beatings,
    all the seething, pent up frustration drove me away. Mis-
    understanding now dawns upon me to this very day.

    To the forests I retreat searching for solace and tranquility.
    Subversion of wickedness denying all responsibility. I want
    to explain... to tell them how I felt but now that is far too late.
    Loss for words, a multitude of emotions crushes down on me.
    Realization of a profound truth they actually never left me.

    Comforted by this new-found introspection. Invisible to me
    I know they still guide and advise. Knowing this, I no longer
    have to mourn the weeping skies.

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    RPT40 commented on Mourn the Weeping Sky

    01-17-2011

    I agree with Artie, this is very good. The further ahead we move in life, the more we have to look back on, and the more we see all around. I also give a 10

    Artie commented on Mourn the Weeping Sky

    01-17-2011

    Wow- This is very good!! I can't believe I'm the first to comment on it since it was posted in '09! 10 from me

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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