Mouse Hunting

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    I wrote this last year in the church when I was making chocolates for the pastor's son's Gradution. I was getting mad and irritated..

    Mouse Hunting

    I Kept hearing noises in North Rome Baptist Church,
    So I went mouse hunting, Moved the ceiling blocks and no noises heard.
    Shut the radio off and waited, but then I got irritated.
    No mouse moved and I got lots to do.
    That stupid mouse wherever he is needs to be caught!
    He might taste good on the grill, But that might be against the law?
    There's many other homes, Why did he pick North Rome?
    Must be He needs God's forgiveness Too?
    Eating everybody's food and shoes..
    This is a church, NOT A ZOO!
    I'll pray God forgive's me also when I kill that mouse.
    'Cuz I ain't ready to go and this is GOD's HOUSE!
    Maybe it ain't even a mouse, Maybe it's a bat?
    Or not even that, A Big Fat Juicy RAT?
    Or a spider? Maybe all God's creatures live here?
    And I've interrupted their atmosphere..
    So, maybe their all planning a war against me?
    Maybe they watch T.V. and see we all have enemies,
    And now their taking over?
    Or Maybe they like my chocolate's Instead of Russel Stover?
    Still little steps on the ceiling and I'm to busy to do anything..
    I'll tell Fritz or I'll finally kill him and use him as a joke..
    I'll put chocolate and peanut butter on the mouse trap
    and he'll eat it and then choke!
    Could stuff the mouse and put him in a bird house
    and use it for decoration and call it God's Creation? 
    When all along the noises that I heard wasn't even a mouse,
    It was A Lost Black Bird...

     

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Mouse Hunting

    11-02-2010

    Creative, humorous and fun but with a message. I've certainly enjoyed reading!

    Olan01 commented on Mouse Hunting

    10-22-2010

    This was fun; you weave a nice story. This speaks well of you skills to write a poem about something so mundane as a mouse in a church, well done and bravo. Olan

    kalel commented on Mouse Hunting

    10-16-2010

    See even when you're annoyed there's still that spark of humor very amusing poem. And good to see you posting again. B

    Worthless

    10/20/2010

    I'd post more if I had time and my own computer. I'm always writing. Sarcasm and honesty, my two best qualities...

    Teardrops commented on Mouse Hunting

    10-14-2010

    You are wonderful full of humor loved this dont care if you were upset when you wrote it . A 10 for me Marie

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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