Mouth-her (Mother)

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    • anniebloom
    • I just lost the love of my life, my heart & my soul, my Dad. The strength that I used to hold on to, is gone. But I know, he's living in my heart forever. From the day he went, I realized that all this while, throughout the struggles, pain, sorrow even until the day he passed, I was on my own, standing and breathing. I learn that, even as a woman, we don't really need to count on someone else to survive. Love is pain, and lose it, sucks. But I'm strong. I don't need to lean on anybody to get up

    Mouth-her (Mother)

    Mouth-her
    (MOTHER)
    By Annie

    Listen, obey, do it, prove it!
    As we have crossed the night and day
    Purposely she asked to appreciate the day
    As in night time she could spend
    For us to listen her song of prayers

    Unfortunately “I”, “I” who we call our self
    Who had never “listen” to the main of key
    Proud is not a surprise word for them
    Blaming “her” is what every child would do
    The rain on her face is hiding in some place
    Behind the balls of eyes it’s replaced
    Her storm heart will always be there
    Her brilliant thoughts will always amaze

    Mouth her Mother!
    Blow out your words!
    Don’t silent you voice and shut down your thoughts
    Don’t ever vibrate your heart of storm
    Because it might exposed the worst scenarios

    Mouth her Mother!
    Sing your anger song!
    So she would never drown in that silly huge wave
    Indeed mother mouth her
    Indeed she’s bleeding
    But never the grown up child
    Could ever seen her bruises

    As the day she blew her burning words
    At night she cares her child as usual
    She kisses as it’s the least she could do
    To cure the pain of her child forever
    “But “I” mother
    “I” hate your words!
    Why do you need to expose your fire?
    Why couldn’t you understand my feeling?
    Why mother? Why u should sink me?
    “I” need your love in your soft tone of voices”

    Mouth her Mother!
    Let her see your bruises!
    Why did you hide your needs of love?
    Save her mother! Save her with your words
    Because it’s the only way that she could follow the flows

    “I” sat under the tree
    It’s covered me from the sun
    “I” sat under the sky
    Where it showed me the moon and stars
    “I” stole my mother’s heart
    I held it in my hand
    But what appeared on top
    What a pretty huge bleed
    I saw the lines of stitches
    Mother “I” realize what I did
    Unfortunately “I” didn’t “listen”
    Because “I” scared of my own self
    But now “I” hold that broken stone of love
    “I” speak for myself
    “As today I realize tomorrow I still die”

    Mother! Mother! Don’t leave me on my own
    Mother I love you too much yes I do!
    Mother I am the storm who lighting the wood
    As it refers to you who was always stood
    Don’t silent mother, forgive me of my rude
    I saw my neighbor who lose their wood
    The wooden broken heart where they were always ignored
    Silent their mother who speechless of their child
    Now she silent forever makes the child speechless

    Mother I hurt, mother I couldn’t stand
    Mother I need you to build my strength
    I promise you mother for most pleasant words
    I won’t ever be that child of my neighbor
    I miss your songs I miss your prayers
    Now say my mother say that you love me
    I can see her smile on her sweet bright face

    Again and again
    Now mother’s heart crying and screaming
    “Mouth her mother!
    Save her again
    As that is the way
    She would sure that you love her
    Always in your heart no matter how much you pay
    You brought her in this world”
    So “I” who you need to claim







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    DuckieoutaH20 commented on Mouth-her (Mother)

    08-16-2009

    I feel this storm rage, its not all torment swallowed, the conflict is so powerful it cannot stay confined.Your emotions break away from your white knuckled grasp. It shift you and everything around you. Look around, everything you NEED is scattered in pieces around your feet

    anniebloom

    08/16/2009

    emotional.. that was the matter that control everything when we were in pain. once we're in pain, we could possibly hurt others too.. thanks for your comment

    optimistic commented on Mouth-her (Mother)

    06-17-2009

    Heart striking hurtful poem, this is a very power poem of tone and the message in it was all over the page in each line you display the effect of heartthrobing excellence this is a great poetry story.

    anniebloom

    08/16/2009

    yes indeed. there were strong messages inside it and i think you can see the points on every lines. it's not just happened only to an individual yet it happens all around us. i look, i noted, i experienced. thanks for your comment..

    amberain commented on Mouth-her (Mother)

    04-30-2009

    Annie, this one comes from and tugs at my heart. This is my favorite of your 3 new...I really enjoy getting lost in your writings!:-) They are soooooo well written and can really convey the feelings behind. Keep it up! Dawn (amberain)

    LEBO commented on Mouth-her (Mother)

    04-28-2009

    AAAAAHHHHHHHHH' "ABM", dat was spiritualy delicious, a fine tastes it left on my palete I must confess, u've outdone ya self, N ya feelins R more than valid. whatever it was that inspired this poem,it came from da soul of ya heart N ya thoughts projected were nicely connected I'm glad that i could B part. lol LEBO

    origionalmerlin commented on Mouth-her (Mother)

    04-26-2009

    long poem, well done did you compose it in english first? i am asking poets to whom englis is a second or third language to please post in more than one language, Forrestbird is doing it in russian/english i have some russian /english poems on here i would love to see more of your writings, you will do well here great write!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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