Moving Forward

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    Sometimes we must open ourselves to be free

    Moving Forward

    Walking slowly into the room she looks upon her now old and sick
    Twenty years past since last she faced her
    Time stood still as bitterness erupted to the surface
    Different thinking and understanding  from growth and trial became forgiveness
    Sad regret was all she felt
    She being true to love always felt moved forward
    Sitting next to her she took her hand in hers and began the healing
    Talking gently of times past gone Sweet and bittersweet memories of when times were good
    Time before her mind began to bend
    Gently smiles and memories came to the surface
    Slowly she rises and looks gently upon her mother now old and ill
    Softness now in the sad lines around her face
    No more bitterness no more regret
    Peace washes over her as she turns and walk away
    Walking slowly out of the room
    Iamadreamr 8/24/09 K.D.G. Copywite

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    TinaD commented on Moving Forward

    01-10-2011

    This is so very beautiful! Forgiving the conflict when it is no longer meaningful to keep it. Such a beautiful thought..,I am going to recommend it to friends.

    dahlusion commented on Moving Forward

    10-26-2009

    This is so beautifully written and presented, so much so, that I was walking with you.

    Iamadreamr

    11/15/2009

    Life oft times will give us the words to tell our story.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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