Mr. Mystic

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Just a little thought of longing and gratitude for the mystery of life :)

Mr. Mystic

Hey Mr. Mystic
Reveal your mystery and magic
Please teach to me what I must be
To heal a history so tragic
Crack me open
Fill me up
Like a crystal
Goblet cup
Let my eyes drink your stars
And feast on your moon
I'll be dancing on Mars
And not a moment too soon
For celestial sidesteps
Kept in proper timing
Can erase shadowed concepts
By brilliantly shining
The white light of enlightenment
Upon those who are pining
For Truth beyond Reason
It's a treasure beguiling
It comes forth like the seasons
Its force keeps me smiling

Hey Mr. Mystic
Whisper your secrets in my ear
Kiss my mind with truth sublime
Erasing any fear
Tell me tales
Spun from gold
Of fiery stars
Blazing bold
And lines of horizons
Etched in platinum
Of flowers so soft
They're mistaken for satin
Sing me the songs
Of the birth of the Earth
And each blade of grass,
Please show me its worth
So I can take a drink
Of everything you think
Elevate me in a blink
Quenching my soul's thirst

Hey Mr. Mystic
Please draw a map for me
Show me the way
Through the crazy maze
Where I emerge down by the sea
Cast my concerns
Into the waves
Let them disperse
See how they behave
When they are no longer
Attached to me
Nor I to them
And we can both be free

Thank you Mr. Mystic
For your ever-lasting wisdom
For teaching without preaching
And opening your kingdom
To all who would enter
To search for their center
I asked, "Where is my power?"
And you handed me a mirror

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ayyan commented on Mr. Mystic

09-08-2010

Very nicely written about the Mr.Mystic and it is fine as your pen draw the compositition and drag our mind too and we like this one. -ayyan-

WordSlinger commented on Mr. Mystic

08-08-2010

Hey this is cool, reminds me I guess of a spiritual journey, and Mr. Mystic, is the wise on our journey, to give us wisdom and confidence to go on, this is a wise-good poem, not to many people think like this, you are wise poet, and thanks for poem, I knew you had one, continue being great, ty WS

Teardrops commented on Mr. Mystic

08-07-2010

The star dust and magic flows in this write loved it and hope to read more soon Marie

ApaqRasgirl commented on Mr. Mystic

08-07-2010

wow, that was a brilliant write dear, I loved it, the mystical magic flowed so very smooth with the rhythm and rhyme in this one..great write...thanks for asking me to share you work......loves ya asha

ginga commented on Mr. Mystic

08-05-2010

Trocka, Your saving up to post for awhile really paid off. This is absolutely amazing considering the theme and the rhymes are grand. ty for letting me knoe you posted. I am saving to faves! ginga

trocka7

08/06/2010

Thank you so much, Ginga! I'm very happy that you found it to be grand :) I appreciate your feedback a lot, thank you!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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