Mr. Tree

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A friend told me a story of something like this, i dont know where he got it from, but the story is pretty much a tree falls in love with the girl and she burns his life away...so alittle inspiration from that.

Mr. Tree

She put you in her garden
She's your source of light and spring
She doesnt even love you
But oh the pleasures that she brings.

Stuck beneath the ground.
If you had the chance to leave, you wouldn't
she tells you that she loves you
Mr. Tree she's really got you wooden.

Your her little Eden,
Your her bite of tasteful lust
She took your apples from you
Your manhood is now in the dust

Cant break free from the ground
you want to leave, but you couldn't
She tells you that she loves you.
and she still has you hard and wooden.

She tells you that she loves you
Takes all that leaves that you've earned
you're gonna have a family
a nice pair of cute little ferns

cant break free from the ground
now the tables really turned
Shes used all her love upon you
you're fire wood for her to burn.

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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