Mt. Tam

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(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

Mt. Tam

There has been ceremony here;
I feel it in these medicine stones. 

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anaisnais commented on Mt. Tam

11-02-2009

Nicely written - it makes me think back to the old Western films with the Cheyenne etc...Medicine woman...and all around them the surrounds of nature and yet always a calming serenity beneath the battles that ensued. A lovely piece t evoke ssuch senses, you should be proud indeed....well done!

dancinghawk

11/02/2009

all around us all the time, indeed ... glad you like this and ty for leaving such a lovely note!

JCKasper commented on Mt. Tam

10-26-2009

Your words weave thru each line with pride and privilege and then to be devoured by grace ..... Well Done!

dancinghawk

10/26/2009

glad you liked it!

stellar commented on Mt. Tam

10-24-2009

Just here again to reminisce its flow.....such a beautiful poem...^_^ v

dancinghawk

10/24/2009

! :)

MalikPeterson commented on Mt. Tam

10-23-2009

There is a calmness here in this piece. The emotions may be swirling like the winds...but it all returns to the calmness of this place. It's as if I can see you standing there pondering and taking in the surroundings and emotions which you etched beautifully into this here computer screen ;) good job.

dancinghawk

10/23/2009

nicely done ... ty for that ... :)

Stryx commented on Mt. Tam

10-23-2009

A great time separates us - yet I feel I know you.

dancinghawk

10/23/2009

! :) time and space, distance, separation ... illusions ... glad we could make this connection!

dancinghawk

10/23/2009

and holy cats - i just read 10,000 Pipes of Peace ...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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