Murder or Nightmare

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    Murder or Nightmare

    Bloodly handprints on the wall.
    Watch me, watch me as I fall.

    Body limp hits the floor.
    There is a knocking at the door.
    I bite my lip.

    My vision blurs, My speech is slurred.
    My body curls up on the ground.
    I only wish to be found.

    I'm sweaty and I'm really panting trying to catch my breath.
    The words gently chanting it was all a dream.
    My own visions come back to haunt me.
    "A dream" I think quietly to myself "But it seemed so real to me."
    My vision restored I walk out the door.

    But the fact remains was it all a dream or a product of reality to blame?
    My fate my friends and foes rests in your hands.
    All I say is goodnight where ever i may be.

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    DarkChi commented on Murder or Nightmare

    08-07-2009

    dark i like it. i beleived that it seemed like it was real yet a dream

    WordSlinger commented on Murder or Nightmare

    07-31-2009

    Interesting , actually I have experienced this , and it was messed up, the beginning was luring, and I got the point, I don't want to be there again, but it's coming again, lol

    WinterFrost commented on Murder or Nightmare

    07-29-2009

    Where have you gone Alfred Hitchcock your public needs you now

    kdavidscott1 commented on Murder or Nightmare

    05-24-2009

    I enjoyed this poem - Bloodly handprints on the wall. Watch me, watch me as I fall. Outstanding KD

    lordmret commented on Murder or Nightmare

    05-23-2009

    omg this was good. Very good actually. I love it but I love u more. hehe keep up the good work baby girl

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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