Murder

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    I wrote this about someone I once cared for. I found out among other things that not only had she been lying to me, cheating on me, BUT she had gotten herself pregnant with another mans child and instead of doing the right thing (being responsible and accountable for her reckless behavior) she chose the cowards way out and murdered her child (had an abortion) simply to run from her irresponsible behavior instead of taking responsibility for her actions and holding herself accountable for her lustful actions ... I have absolutely no respect for this mother. Instead I see her for who she really is-a MURDER!!!! This poem is in Loving memory of the innocent life she took from this world.

    Murder

    I’ve been let down by you so many times

    I just don’t want to deal with you anymore

    Makes you the person you are not the person you want to be

    Running from Heart to Heart you still end the day alone

    You may have a man’s arms around you in the night

    But you’ll never earn a man’s Heart

    You’re not good enough  

    You’re just another lie

    You’re fast to lay on your back

    Spread your legs to the world

    While your kids are in the room next door

    Crying mommy mommy

    Don’t worry children

    You’re a second priority to mommies hunger for attention

    Try to present yourself like a respectable woman

    You murdered your child

    Because of your selfishness

    Your reckless irresponsible actions in the night

    I pity that poor soul that never had a chance in this world

    Because of you

    You left a trail a broken Hearts behind you

    You have no remorse for the hearts you use

    Jumping from one to another

    Not one has the patience for your insecurities

    You’re a fraud

    Your looks reflect your low value

    I can say with all my Heart

    You were a mistake

    A regret

    What did I ever see in you

    I’ve forgotten what it was

    No matter you’re just another girl

    -Fin-

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    poett commented on Murder

    04-26-2014

    i think as women we have choice to do as we please but in my opinion anyone killing a baby or ending a pregnancy is wrong. theres many others who can not have children n would give anything to do so. if god gave you the gift of carrying a baby in your womb no matter how hard it can be for anyone they should not think about anything but this child. we deal with so many things from chronic n deadly illnesses that i believe dealing with giving life to another soul is not a burden but a gift. babies are angels n if for anyone who has been through abuse, rape or bad situation well think about your parents dealing with everything to raise you up no matter what. give this baby a choice dont kill it because someone harmed you. in the case of this person in the poem cheating n thinking it would affect her relationship, her family or whoever why wouldnt she think about all that before starting anything. the only one paying was this innocent who never got a chance. i dont like judging anyone but i dont agree with abortion. i have friends n family who would give anything to be given a chance at parenthood. my opinion only.
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    TheLastCowboy

    04/26/2014

    Thank you, I know this is deep issue for women and to my surprise this poem is rated at a 10 so far.

    517Jacqueline commented on Murder

    04-24-2014

    How can you call someone a murderer if as what you said children is her second priority? Of course she doesn't like that she's making her children 2nd best deep inside her she doesn't like it. Or maybe I just don't know her to say this. Did she had a late abortion or early abortion where she used birth control? Even if it's late or early, Eternal God said that the babies are safe in heaven. Maybe she doesn't want to add more child to her children because it's difficult. I'm sorry if I told you this that makes me a Pro-choice. Before I took a test whether I'm a pro-choice or a pro-life. The result was I'm 50% pro-choice and 50% pro-life. I thought your poem illustrate your feelings, it's a good write even if I'm against you, sorry.
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    TheLastCowboy

    04/24/2014

    ok here's the details she was married, slept with her husbands buddy and got pregnant. At the time she already had a daughter. She decided to kill her ops baby because it wasn't her husbands, it was the other mans. After she had the abortion she got herself pregnant again but this time with her husband. She had a boy. I just don't respect her choice or logic at all. Her actions cost a life and that don't sit right with me-harming any child-there's no excuse for it. In the end this is how I look at her.

    TheLastCowboy commented on Murder

    04-24-2014

    Pura your not listening to the point of the poem-no where in my write do I say a woman doesn't have a choice, no where do I talk about rape, no where do I talk about birth defects... What I'm talking about is a wife cheating on her husband and getting herself pregnant with the other guy. She clearly screwed up;so instead of doing the right thing and having the baby she MURDERED it! If you think a baby in the womb isn't alive or doesn't matter I suggest you talk to a woman who's mis-carried, orthe women who wish they could have a child but cant for what ever the reason, those women who cant have children but would LOVE to adopt and provide a better life for a child. As for me I LOVE children and it's a very personal issue for me. You may say well your just a man what do you know- glad you asked, My first kill in Iraq was a child, I wish I didn't have to kill him but war is hell. Ever since I've been very protective over children, because I had to kill one in Iraq so don't you dare call me Heart less or say I don't know what I'm talking about. I promise you that I know more than you will ever about life complements of three combat tours in Iraq. p.s. the woman in this write was also a complete liar and already had kids. She couldn't stop sleeping around and she'd keep her kids in another room as she entertained men, while they cried she'd do nothing, all that mattered to her was the attention she was getting from men. Again I was very disgusted at her poor character as a mother.
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    pura commented on Murder

    04-24-2014

    So if someone was raped youd think it her right to live with something like that! I think what you are saying is very closed minded. And personally its there choice. If you dont want a child nor have the means to raise it when you cant work what makes you think that child would be better in a home with no money no time little love. To bring a child into ones life is not easy and sometimes in the womb they have defects that would not make there life happy or easy for the child. Your comment is so heartless!
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