Muse The Poet #2

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    • ApaqRasgirl
    • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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    Just practicing a little trying to learn to write better/different types of poetry. Please read "Muse The Poet" first.........thanks all loves ya asha

    Muse The Poet #2

    1. easy to rhyme it. Just 10 lines this time

    Just a muse
    No need for abuse
    Reasons to rhyme
    Season’s it so fine
    We're not all the same
    For us not a child's game
    Come read my rhyme
    Guaranteed some good-times
    Poetry our love
    Like duckies in a tub

    2. A bit harder to bind it, 11 this time.

    Just muse it over
    Poets, we all want to share it
    Readers design the future
    Cast out the criticaster
    But please no need for meanness
    We share from our hearts
    So have a good laugh
    Here’s a tissue for tears
    If it makes you sigh
    Don’t leave me your fart
    I’ll
    just say stow it

    3. Now try to expand it, 12 lines, rhyme me, yet not.

    Everyday we continue…
    Expanding our venue…
    Words are just words…
    Yet some just fodder for birds…
    Another great write…
    Might bring all delight…
    Try to keep it short~~~
    Maybe long as the oceans are wide, blue as the sky~~~
    Keep counting syllables~~~
    To keep you on your toes~~~
    Throw in an adjective or two~~~
    If you need to add in a few~~~

    4. Rules!! what Rules!! add three more lines, cause 13, unlucky for me..LOL

    A Poet is a Poet
    Those that’s been educated
    Like big words they’ve contemplated
    Others just chew over
    Maybe Mull over Rhodan's Cerebral Masterpiece
    Or maybe just ponder
    A muse to wonder
    Some can be nerds
    I’ll just leave this one alone
    No matter your reasons
    Were all just the same
    Too many to name
    Love, romance, death, nature, desire
    Try to lust your pants on fire
    Every word written is our fame
    You can’t control it, no matter the name

    written by
    asha
    2010
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    DrewMcNee commented on Muse The Poet #2

    08-10-2010

    Practice makes perfect ,so they say so practice on every day. Small points. Stanza 1 line 4 [season's ?] Stanza 4 line 4 Rhodan ?] A good rule of thumb: the more you write, the more you edit. I personally prefer tightly crafted pieces, so Muse #1 is my choice. But the good thing about this poetry stuff is that no one is always right except the scribe wot writ it. Drew.

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/10/2010

    thank you dear for all the tips and help,,,,I am working hard to learn.......loves ya asha

    Savant commented on Muse The Poet #2

    08-06-2010

    I appreciate this work because these types of excercises are a catalyst for growth. Good clean fun creativity. It's relieving.

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/06/2010

    thank you very much for the sweet comment. I wrote this as a one of my learning learning pieces.....glad you liked it......thanks for reading my work love asha

    cheronld commented on Muse The Poet #2

    08-06-2010

    That was just way too much fun....I felt like I was dancing as well as reading...its like the game show where you say a word and your partner has to guess....this should be made into a game for writers...its just fun and laughs...great my friend...Cher

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/06/2010

    thank you dear friend, I am thrilled you got so much enjoyment from my work, if only they could all have that affect.........thanks loves ya asha

    ginga commented on Muse The Poet #2

    08-04-2010

    Asha, Quirky, fun, and just plain amusing. ginga

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/04/2010

    LOL. thanks glad it tickled you,,,,,,,it was successful then....thanks bunches loves ya asha

    gogant commented on Muse The Poet #2

    08-03-2010

    A poem in any other works, smiles the same........still bouncing and a-grinning..............either way, it's great.....................gogant

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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