music and dreams

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    love, my lover and my monster.

    music and dreams

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    often my heart beats like a fiddle
    dancing right down the middle of me
    it's a delightful distraction
    my perfect passion for you
       like some beautiful pain
    that descends like rocks and rain
       that soaks and stones me
    proving again that i am not completely alone
       and still so in much in love.
    be still my ferocious fear
        that belief that you can't hear me screaming
     
    that you believe that i am not running the streets
    that you believe my words
    like a flurry birds
    decorate this town with such silly song
    but the voice that i dream with sings only to you.





















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    poeticmike commented on music and dreams

    11-30-2011

    Such a beautiful message! great write! very prolific indeed i love your imagery also!..keep up the good work!

    Phission

    02/04/2012

    thanks, mate. i apreciate your time.

    ontherise1984 commented on music and dreams

    11-14-2011

    I have to agree with Logik's comment; simple messages written creatively make great poems. This IS a great poem.

    Phission

    02/04/2012

    thank you so much !

    Logik commented on music and dreams

    11-06-2011

    NICE PIECE! I like the rhyme scheme the words were nice man very well executed...

    Phission

    11/06/2011

    thank you ! it's simple and not very deep...it's just that i love a girl. she is very special and makes my world twist and turn....i love you, annie.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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