music man

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    music man
    as i watched the music man
    let his crooning carry me away
    saw the distant look in his eyes
    felt his words like an embrace
    as i sang with music man
    we sang of of all the beauty
    felt what he was feeling then
    something had consumed me
    standing in a sea of same
    calm washed over us in waves
    as the music man just played
    and sang to us that day

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    SuSpence commented on music man

    05-02-2010

    This was beautiful and melodic. Do you write music? I could easily see this being the first amazing verse to an amazing song. (I hear your song in my head now as I type) -Spence
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    bforibus commented on music man

    11-03-2009

    this simplicity and beauty wrapped up in one tightly wound ball. i dont mean simple in word play because thats obviously not it, but just the gesture of the subject. great job oon this. i loved it
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