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    this was a poem I wrote about music which I love depending on your mood you can find a sound to lift you up make you cry make you throw things and put you to sleep


    I hear music all about around the corner whatever route
    I can hear it plainly you see anywhere everywhere any time grand sound indeed.  the marvelous beat and tone so
    beautiful we become one. the sparkle in my eye from the very sound the high pitch and low were the sound of music profound  I hear music clearly in the high place and the low the glorious raps and taps bringing a quite peaceful sound  it makes it's way through my ear sometimes it will bring a tear or laughter which ever it choose. I can't imagine life without music what it brings to us is so clear

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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