Muted Tapestries

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  • Emotional
    • MSVanallen
    • Learning that deliverance doesn't come without a birthing shroud...

    Poem Commentary

    This piece written in response to a commentary from UnworthyFather on a piece called "Miles."  Here is the other side of those miles...

    Muted Tapestries

    Some,  just can't hold
    superficial conversation.

    The empty words
    would scream the volumes 
    of the truer selves - 
    Drown out the meaningless
    exchange,
    Cry out into hollow winds
    From depths abandoned
    -- even in vacancy...

    The spirit often rests
    in the eyes.

    Here, words are useless
    against the sovereignty
    of the heart,
    And few greater truths exist
    Than that which is spoken
    in decibels of silence --
    Even those things
    The unruliest of members
    does not utter...
     

    Even death
    has an expression here.

    But -
    Until its' final soliloquy
    rises up
    To ignite the vacant stare
    By which these lids
    are closed to rest,
    There will dwell inside
    these muted tapestries
    All that words resist --
    Wholly hooded,
    Silently shrouded,
    The only hour of that
    unveiling
    Would have your face
    before me,
    Where parted lips
    would whisper
    The taste of timeless
    lovers' kiss...

    MSV

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    kdarcy commented on Muted Tapestries

    11-29-2009

    I to did a double read, I loved it, it is very rich- some of its treasures hidden. Good solid write, be well k

    danmartyjake1 commented on Muted Tapestries

    10-18-2009

    Ooh. I really feel this one so much. I read it a few times. It is wonderful.

    MSVanallen

    10/18/2009

    Funny you sahould say that. Seems like I read it a hundred times after I wrote it...deep feeling for me, too. Thanks. MSV

    Artie commented on Muted Tapestries

    10-18-2009

    I see different things when I read this piece. Mostly, I see the beautiful heart of an outstanding poet. 10 from me

    Hampton commented on Muted Tapestries

    08-27-2009

    This work is beautifully composed and spoken. It carries a softness that soothes the readers emotions.

    HarverTomsson commented on Muted Tapestries

    08-17-2009

    If I could meet you in the decibles of silence, with your face before me, I would know the soveriegn volumes of your heart written on your tapestries, whispering away the final mirage.

    MSVanallen

    08/17/2009

    And were we to meet in that canyon of silence, it would be on the bridge of true comprehension as those hushed volumes of the heart have not escaped you...

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    MSVanallen’s Poems (13)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    The Name of Ishi 4
    Muted Tapestries 6
    Bondage 13
    Miles 10
    Cherish all the Seasons 14
    Of Worlds 9
    The Iron, The Chain and the Seal 13
    Tokens of Obsession 10
    Of Believing 1
    Folded 4
    Intensity 5
    Harvest of Betrayal 13
    Shift of the Swell 10