My Angel


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My Angel

My angel,
I love it when you smile
it brightens my day.
When you laugh,
brings me warmth.
The look in your eyes,
makes me remember the good old days.
But all though your memories cherish me,
it wouldn't stop playing in my head,
like a movie on repeat.

My angel,
you make me blush,
you make me go on a sugar rush.
Every mile away from you,
makes you more visible in my mind.
Thinking about you nonstop,
listening you laugh and look at you smile,
I pry to keep and to be unattached of me.

My angel,
you had opportunities,
some you took advantage,
some not.
But I still love you,
seems now you made you right turn.
You would be free and make your dreams worth.
You took that ungreatful, horrible monkey off.
I'm proud.
You let the great angel take you for a ride.

I cast an angel to fly above,
to see that your protected.
I tell the angel to comfort you at night,
and to bless you.


I thank God,
to have you,
to keep you in my mind because your important.
To me and your family.
It took 7 days to make the world,
make your life last because you do have chances and opportunities.

:) (L) :D

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daydreamer23 commented on My Angel


wow...that was really beautiful how you expressed your emotions awesome write man,bless.



thank you again wow thanks alot your ending in comments are also similar hahaha God Bless

Sydney commented on My Angel


this is really good. you are happy with this person in your life.



There's actually 3 people in this poem. but thank you very much! Thank you! God Bless!

muttman1 commented on My Angel


That is touching, you are very good at expressing yourself with words, make sure you never quit writing.



I won't! Thank you! I always try to send a message in my poems, well most of them, but i hope that readers get the message. Thank you! So much. God Bless!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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